Review of Championship B’tok by Edward M. Lerner

There isn’t really a problem with Championship B’tok as a story. The problem is that it isn’t a story—it’s just part of one. That larger story is likely a good one but this piece of it doesn’t work on its own, for reasons that don’t have anything to do with the writing or storytelling.

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Championship B’tok (the title refers to a more complicated, alien variant of chess) is an ambitious story with a complicated plot. It utilizes 3rd-person limited POVs that rotate rapidly among a number of different characters. Such a technique often leads to a story hard to get a handle on until well into the story. Which is why a lot of works, including the Wheel of Time, start slow. Books that don’t, including 2015 Hugo best novel nominee The Dark Between the Stars, provide a payoff later in the story. The problem here is that Championship B’tok is so short I didn’t get a handle on things until the story was almost over (although it is a long novelette).

The b’tok reference, of course, refers not just to the regular games of b’tok between the human commander of a former POW planet-camp and the human leader of the defeated, alien “Snakes,” but to the Snakes clandestine efforts to prepare for a revolt. But the board appears even bigger than that. There may be a third group moving not just humans and Snakes but also the other sapient species in the known galaxy by controlling technological progress. It’s cool stuff well done. Why can’t I get it in a book? (Here I am showing my anti-serial priors.)

About H.P.

Blogs on books at Every Day Should Be Tuesday (speculative fiction) and Hillbilly Highways (country noir and nonfiction).
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4 Responses to Review of Championship B’tok by Edward M. Lerner

  1. Actually, you can get it in a book. “Championship B’tok” (with some changes and extensions) became a segment of the recently released InterstellarNet: Enigma.


  2. Pingback: 2015 Hugo Best Novelette Ballot | Every Day Should Be Tuesday

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